Young people are often influenced by their peers? Do the advantages of peers outweigh the disadvantages?

Adolescents are frequently impacted by their

peers

.

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statement has both benefits and drawbacks which will be discussed

further

in the following paragraphs . From the first perspective, nowadays young people

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by their

peers

.There are several pros to

this

circumstance. First and foremost, pressure by adults

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to enhance communicational skills ,

this

is owing to the fact that young people start to social interaction , their

peers

can master not only interaction field, but

also

can assist

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teamwork and conflict resolution skills which are crucial for later success in life.

Furthermore

, when

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person

achieve

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high awards ,

peers

also

try to

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way .

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, university students

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passion

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for

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competitions with

another

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academy students since they

also

want to achieve

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high level

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reputation

like

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intelligent students, after all ,

this

situation can be advantageous to

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the community

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for

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.  From the second perspective, there are

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of negative impacts associated with

this

phenomenon.

Firstly

, mental well-being risks

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young people since pressure by adults to

peers

can cause bad

fulfillments

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like suicide or

perform do

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not allowed games or acts like smoking and violence.

In addition

to

this

,

peers

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physical force may

also

create problems between adolescents and their

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families

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, as they might adopt

behaviors

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or beliefs that diverge from those taught at home. So,

this

could lead to discord familial and troubles in

community

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. As an illustration,

this

notion has been proven by the recent research

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carried out by scientists

of

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Boston

university

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. They found that adolescents engage in risky

behaviors

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due to

peers

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influence approximately 75%

than

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previous

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time.

To conclude

, everything has been stated so far,

teenagers

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impacts

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to

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their

peers

holds advantageous sides including enhancing communication talent

as well as

health insecurity

along with

the

lose

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of relationship

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relationship

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relationships

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between family and friends should not be overlooked.