Measures have been put in place to improve road safety by reducing the speed limits. Some people believe there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people reckon that by reducing speed
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the government increase
road
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safety.
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others are more down to the idea that there are superior
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alternative
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. I personally believe that by decreasing speed
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road
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will be safer. Admittedly, there are several better options. First of all, with fines
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road
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will be safer.
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is because it can help reduce the drivers
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drive
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their
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car
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extremally
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fast.
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their
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car
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speed they will fined by traffic controllers and they pay a lot of money for
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.
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, drivers think about it
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before
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their
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and they
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drive
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their
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speed.
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, if they do not
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cars very fast they will
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. I,
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,
this
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is true that by speed
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highway
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will be safer.
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it is very necessary.
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is
ecause
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because
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reduce
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traffic accidents but
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decrease
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a
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number of human beings
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who are hit
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by cars.
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, if
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a driver
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drive
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slowly it can stop very fast in a dangerous situation like when an old woman
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the
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and
she
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walk very
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the driver which
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her or his
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slowly
it
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can stop at that time.
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result
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the number of people which cars hit can minimize.
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, if they do not
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this
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a
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number of traffic accidents and
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people
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hit the
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can increase. In
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by
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the speed
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highway's
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safety will improve.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph logically follows the previous one, and information is well-organized. Use more linking words or phrases to enhance flow.
task achievement
Expand on some ideas to provide a more comprehensive view. Develop each main point further with more detailed examples or elaboration.
coherence cohesion
Your essay includes an introduction and a conclusion, which help provide a clear structure to your argument.
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You've included examples to support your arguments, allowing the reader to understand your points better.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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