The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The given bar chart, which depicts in great detail, illustrates the number of individuals who have lived in owned and rented houses in two countries from The United Kingdom for almost a century. The unit is based on percentage.
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, it is clearly observable that the highest and least the amount of households in rented and owned accommodation were nearly 77% - 25% respectively in 1918. To commence with, the proportion of people who have lived in
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house from 1918 to 2001 increased dramatically from almost 25%
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to nearly 72%.
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, from 2001 to 2011 households in owned accommodation decreased slightly from almost 70% to nearly 65%. On the flip side, the ratio of human begins who have lived in rented houses from 1918 to 2001 decreased considerably from nearly 77% to almost 30%
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from 2001 to 2011 households in rented accommodation increased slightly from nearly 30% to almost 37%.
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