University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Give reason for your answer and include relevant example from your experience or knowledge

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looked for the truth and help
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humanity to get better life.
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in another hand he will face a lot of
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one is the new weather,
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we can say he should make and build
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ships like
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people who went abroad and failed because many
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because I had seen enough and we don't
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task achievement
Your essay addresses the topic, but the response is not fully developed. Try providing more detailed analysis and relevant examples to strongly support your position.
coherence cohesion
The ideas in your essay could be better organized. Developing a clear structure with a smooth flow between points will improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
Your main points need more support. Including specific examples and clearer connections between your arguments will make them more compelling.
task achievement
You have approached a popular topic with a personal viewpoint, which is good for expressing individuality in your writing.
coherence cohesion
You have addressed both advantages and disadvantages, showing an understanding of the balanced-view structure.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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