Some parents buy their childern a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

There is no denying the fact that some parents are baying for

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children

a large

number

of

toys

to play with.

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it is a commonly held belief that there

is

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advantages

for buy

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to buying

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a lot of

toys

for your

children

, there is

also

an argument

that

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is

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are

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disadvantages for the kid

of

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having a large

number

of

toys

.

This

essay will analyse

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topic from both points of view and

exspress

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express

my opinion. On

one

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the one

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hand, a large

number

of

toys

will make

children

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children's

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mind

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more active.

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, they will play and

creat

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create

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small

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a small

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world in

there

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mind

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.

In addition

, more

toys

will make them

uesing

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using

a

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mobali

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mobile

phones less than others.

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, if they have

toys

they will not

playing

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play

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on the phone.

On the other hand

, there are many

disadvantage

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like having a lot of

toys

make

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makes

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them cannot realise

toys

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value.it is

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possible to say that,

may be

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maybe

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they will not take care of

them

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toys

becouse

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because

they have a large figure of

toys

and if some of them

broke

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kids are not being sad.

Moreover

, when

this

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this child

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children

growing up they will

be want

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want

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evry thing

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everything

.

In

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instance, they will

be

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want to change

there

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cars our baying a lot of

thing

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are not needed. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to

this

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these

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questions, on balance,

how ever

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however

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i

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tend to believe that a large

number

of

toys

for kids

it

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apply

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is not right

becouse

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because

children

need to learn how to play and

being

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be

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happy with

any thing

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anything

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.