The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2003 and the projection for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2003 and the projection for 2050.
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The column chart illustrates the figures for citizens in
India
,
China
, Japan, and the US in the years 1950 and 2003, which
also
shows future predictions for 2050. It is observed that the proportion of
India
will increase gradually,
whereas
the number of people in
China
and Japan will drop substantially, and the population of the U.S. is predicted to remain constant in the future. In 1950, the figure for
India
was 15%,
whereas
that for
China
was higher at nearly 25 %. From
this
year to 2003, the figure for
India
saw an increase of 4%.
By contrast
, the proportion of
China
declined by 4% during
this
period.
Also
,
India
is predicted to be nearly 20% in 2050.
Moreover
, in 1950, the proportion of Japan was nearly 5%, and it is predicted to decrease marginally to just over 0% in 2050. It is worth noting that the figure for you was just over 5% in 1950, and it is projected to stay roughly the same at 5% between 2003 and 2050.
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