The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by acting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by acting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the percentages of
oil
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resources in various regions all over the world. In general, the Middle East keeps the most
oil
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resources among any other areas
while
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Asia, the United States, and Western Europe are the major places in which they consume the most amount of
oil
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.
According to
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the graph, 56.52% of
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is stored in the Middle East. The proportion accounts for over half of the total amount and its number is about four times as large as in Canada (14.84%).
By comparison
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, Canadians used less fuel with 2.48%. As for other nations, the amounts of
oil
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resources basically are not over 10%, and they are particularly low in Australia and New Zealand (0.30%).
Moreover
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, substantial
oil
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is depleted in Asia which comprises 26.21%, followed by the United States(25.48%), and Western European employ 19.24%.
Whereas
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, those places mentioned above hold about 1-3% of the fuel and in the case of the consumption in some places, they deplete less than they have.
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, it is worth noting that the amount of
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reservoirs and the depletion are almost the same, the former is 6.58% and the latter is 6.56%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • resources
  • consumption
  • annually
  • regions
  • disparity
  • consumption rates
  • high/low resources
  • global market dynamics
  • geopolitical relations
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