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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
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These pictures illustrate how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled and
end
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products
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 will
produce
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be produced
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 from
the
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apply
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recycled material. There are 9 stages in the diagram, from loading the
plastic
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bottles
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 from recycling cans to
truck
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trucks
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,
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 to producing end
products
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 from raw materials recycled from
plastic
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bottles
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. First of all the
bottles
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 are put away in
recycle
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a recycle
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 can,
then
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 the
bottles
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 are loaded into the truck to
delivere
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deliver
 to
recycling
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the recycling
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 centre. Once the
bottles
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 are sorted, they are compressed into blocks, after that the blocks are crushed into a washing tub. In the next step, the crushed parts will go to a machine to produce
plastic
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 pellets, after the
plastic
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 pellets are produced, the pellets are heated to form raw material which will be used for producing new
products
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. When the raw materials are formed, they will be sorted.
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, different end
products
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 will be produced by raw materials that
recycled
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are recycled
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 from
plastic
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bottles
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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