Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others contest those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Nowadays,

skyscrappers

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skyscrapers

and other high-raised

bulding

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building

constructions are popular in urban areas. Regarding

this

matter, some people are concerned about the proper building

guidence

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guidance

by

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they believe that the

government

should be

in-charge

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of

mainting

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maintaining

the regulations related to the construction of a building

while

some

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others are totally

in

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the opposite side of

this

idea. They strongly believe that

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no limit should be present there and the investors should have the

freedom

to build

according to

their choice. In my opinion, some rules and regulations should be present in case of a new construction which should be maintained by the authority. On the one hand, building authorities having an expert panel, run by the

government

always set some parameters to construct a proper building

of

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which

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are for the benefit of society and the city.

For example

, in many urban areas, an area should be selected for creating

a

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greenery in a building complex.

This

step allows to increase the number of trees in the

metropoliton

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metropolitan

areas which is essential for improving the air quality of a city.

Besides

, a strict restriction on maintaining the building heights and keeping other facilities are seen in

this

procedure which includes playgrounds and other safety measures.

On the other hand

, the

freedom

to build a skyscraper

according to

the will of the

beneficiers

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beneficiaries

beneficiary

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some issues. Actually,

this

type of

freedom

can bring a lot of drawbacks despite

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having some facilities like maintaining a breathtaking structural view or the ultimate exhibition of creativities. By maintaining these, the actual safety measures like the importance of emergency exits or

fire-exits

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are often underestimated.

For instance

, investigations

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the causes of hazardous situations of different building collapses in many cities showed that the major cause behind those failures

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because of overlooking the safety measures and those buildings

also

violated the actual rules set by the

government

. In conclusion, the failure of the buildings violating the regulations is

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evidence that the builders should not get that kind of

freedom

. I think that construction in the megacities should be under the supervision of the

government

to avoid hazards and

also

to provide a clean and safe city.