The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares data about how many cell phones that 5 various companies sold in millions from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
, it was important that the trends of all firms other than Apple and Samsung reduced over the period of 6 years.
According to
the diagram, in the beginning, Nokia, the most popular company among people for selling mobile in 2006, hit 345;
then
it increased and reached the maximum point at 475 in 2008;
however
, it declined to 442 in 2009 and scored 463 in 2010;
thereafter
, its figure fell to 335 in 2012. The next one in 2006 was Motorola;
moreover
, its number of sales went down from 210 in 2006 to 28 in 2012.
In contrast
, Samsung scored 117 in 2006 after that it climbed to 396.5 in 2012 and touched the first level. The graph demonstrates that at the start, Ericsson reported 74;
then
it jumped and peaked at 102 in 2007;
nevertheless
, it reduced and in 2012 recorded the number that was the same as Motorola. The
last
company which started its work in 2007 was Apple;
additionally
, it scored 2.3 in 2007;
thereafter
, it rose to 135.8 in 2012.
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  • annual sales
  • fluctuations
  • market saturation
  • technological advancements
  • consumer trends
  • brand dominance
  • growth trajectory
  • market share
  • innovations
  • peak sales
  • decline
  • stagnate
  • proliferate
  • exponential growth
  • market dynamics
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