You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The following table gives the proportions of the most wealthy nations for
petrol
in addition
to additional financial data. 
Overall
, it is interesting to note that there are ten various
countries
;
however
, the rates of the average monthly disposable income are higher than the average monthly
petrol
expenditure,
while
the
last
column describes the portion of the money that goes towards
petrol
.  Having a closer look at the first column, it is remarkable that the average monthly income fluctuates; Norway has the highest average at 4329.07%, followed by Sweden (3548.81$).
While
Eritrea and Turkey are the two lowest proportions.  Turning to the average monthly
petrol
expenditure, most of the rates of the money go to Norway and Turkey, which are the highest;
however
, the remaining
countries
fall into the same category, between 200$ and 300%.
On the other hand
, the
last
column shows the
countries
that describe the percentage of monthly income wasted on
petrol
. Eritrea ranked first at 61.10%, which is nearly two times more than Turkey.
In contrast
, the rest
countries
are all under 20% except Greece, which is 5% more than 20%, which is 25.40%.
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