The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following table gives the proportions of the most wealthy nations for
petrol
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in addition
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to additional financial data. 
Overall
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, it is interesting to note that there are ten various
countries
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;
however
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, the rates of the average monthly disposable income are higher than the average monthly
petrol
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expenditure,
while
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the
last
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column describes the portion of the money that goes towards
petrol
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.  Having a closer look at the first column, it is remarkable that the average monthly income fluctuates; Norway has the highest average at 4329.07%, followed by Sweden (3548.81$).
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Eritrea and Turkey are the two lowest proportions.  Turning to the average monthly
petrol
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expenditure, most of the rates of the money go to Norway and Turkey, which are the highest;
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, the remaining
countries
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fall into the same category, between 200$ and 300%.
On the other hand
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, the
last
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column shows the
countries
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that describe the percentage of monthly income wasted on
petrol
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. Eritrea ranked first at 61.10%, which is nearly two times more than Turkey.
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, the rest
countries
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are all under 20% except Greece, which is 5% more than 20%, which is 25.40%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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