The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water.
The diagram illustrates the process of turning dirty
water
into clean water
by a simple system.
Overall
, we can see that there are three steps to recycle dirty water
into clean water
, beginning with opening the lid of a filter plastic barrel and ending with filling clean water
into a glass.
At the first step of the process, the lid of a water
-filter drum made from plastic is opened, dirty water
is then
passed into a water
-filter system which is a big plastic barrel involving a layer
of gravel at the bottom, next is a layer
of charcoal, and then
a layer
of sand, an empty part above which account for about half of the drum, where dirty water
is contained.
The dirty water
will go through sand, then
charcoal, and gravel layer
to be filtered. After being filtered, it is led to another storage drum by a long small pipe from the bottom of a water
filter. At that time the water
is ready for the consumer.Submitted by writingeilts on
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