The charts represent water consumption in three countries in 1980.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
used in three sections comparing three different countries in 1980.The figures are given in percentages.
Use synonyms
Overall
,it can be seen that Linking Words
Britain
and the Use synonyms
USA
utilized Use synonyms
water
in industry the most Use synonyms
whereas
,Linking Words
the
most of the Correct article usage
apply
water
in Australia was consumed in agriculture.
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To begin
with,Linking Words
Britain
and the Use synonyms
USA
had similar patterns.As you can see in the pie charts the majority of Use synonyms
water
was used in industry,accounting for 48% and 47% respectively.Followed closely by Use synonyms
water
consumption in agriculture which was 37% in Use synonyms
Britain
and 41% in the Use synonyms
USA
.The least was utilized in households which were responsible for 15% in Use synonyms
Britain
and 12% in the Use synonyms
USA
.
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On the other hand
,people in Australia had different Linking Words
water
consumption trends.More than half of the Use synonyms
water
was used in agriculture.Just under two-fifths of Use synonyms
water
was utilized in industry making it the second most consumed section.Households were still the least in all countries occupying less than 10%.Use synonyms
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