The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The map pictures above
,
indicate the changes that were made to the West Park Secondary Remove the comma
apply
School
in the 60-year period after it was built (1950 to 2010).
Firstly
, from 1950 to 1980, houses beside the school
building gave their place to a parking lot and the science block, which is an extended part of the school
. In the same period also
, we can see that the lands used for farming changed the use to sports field
. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
On the other hand
, more difference
can be seen going from 1980 to 2010. One of which, is the parking area, Fix the agreement mistake
differences
that
covered half of the whole land and made the field of sports relocate, so the parking could take its place. Correct pronoun usage
which
As a result
, the playground's size decreased, so it could fit the new sports zone.
To sum up
, the road, main school
building and a part of the playground remained untouched during the period. Although
, science
block stood the same from 1980 to 2010, Correct article usage
the science
but
it was constructed with the Remove the conjunction
apply
school
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