The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, that the

crime

rate has decreased in recent years. I firmly believe

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modern technologies,

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help

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prevent and uncover crimes.

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preventing prohibited activities, the impact of CCTV and phone cameras will be considered.

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is because offenders know, that their robbery or

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murder will be recorded and they will be found, which stops criminals from

commiting

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committing

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activities. It is proved by the example, where in New York street bands and singular offenders

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committed

a lot of thefts and shootings

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century;

however

, after the appearance of CCTV, the rate of

crime

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.

In contrast

, in cities where cameras do not exist, dangerous people do not have the deterrent factor.

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, the usage of modern forensic

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such

as

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DNA samples and mobile

phones

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billing decreases

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crime

rate significantly.

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the scene of murder may be researched and used as

a strong evidence

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against a murderer.

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, in the US more than 80% of

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crimes have been solved because of findings of the DNA samples of criminals at the

crime

scenes. Another example is the murder of the Murdek family, where the decisive argument against the

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accused

was the billing of his mobile phone. In conclusion, I would stick to my opinion that contemporary

thechnologies

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technologies

have decreased the number of crimes

as well as

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crime

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wide CCTV

existance

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existence

and a lot of

technics, which

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techniques that

can prove

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of the suspect

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the

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scene.