There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands often increasing world population. Give your opinions on this.
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task achievement
The essay introduces the topic and presents an opinion. However, it lacks depth in the exploration of the topic. Provide more detailed examples and explanations to strengthen the arguments.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main point. The organization can be improved by clearly linking ideas and providing a logical progression of thought.
coherence cohesion
Conclude your arguments by summarizing your main points. The conclusion could use more emphasis on reinforcing your stance on the issue.
task achievement
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task achievement
The introduction states a clear position on the topic, providing a solid basis for your essay.
coherence cohesion
The essay attempts to address the implications of genetically modified food on health and the environment, covering multiple perspectives.
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