some people are interested in international news, others prefer watching national news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While
some people
argue that as we are living in a global village, so worldwide information should be reached to them through local media, many others believe that they have nothing to do with the news
related to other nations, local news
of their region is enough. This
essay intends to discuss both perspectives. I believe that both approches
are good in their own way.
There are many reasons why some Correct your spelling
approaches
people
believe that they need to know what is happening around them whether it is countrywise or citywise. They want to be made aware of the issues in neighbour conitents
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contents
,
so that if there is Remove the comma
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a
any Remove the article
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possiblities
of crises they can be prepared ahead of time. Correct your spelling
possibilities
For example
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the corona
corona virus
was Correct your spelling
coronavirus
initially
founded in china
, but with the help of overseas Capitalize word
China
news
media, people
of neighbour
countries Replace the word
neighbouring
got
aware in time and Verb problem
became
was
ready to fight Correct subject-verb agreement
were
with
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this
disease. So, in view of this
phenomenon, I think access to abroad news
has myriad benefits, which can not be overlooked.
on other
hand, those who assert that watching national Correct article usage
the other
news
is satisfying their curiosity, give their reasons as follows. First of all, some individulas
have never been to the Correct your spelling
individuals
neighbour
cities in their whole life span, for those Replace the word
neighbouring
people
i
think having access to the Change the capitalization
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news
of other parts of the world does not matter at all and it is way
of wasting Add an article
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the way
of
time and resources. Change preposition
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Secondly
, because of
lack of Change preposition
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loyality
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loyalty
of
these Change preposition
to
news
channels for their people
, makes them hesitate to believe them blindly, whether for local news
or international news
. For example
, the famous news
channel AAJ TAK works for well known
political Add a hyphen
well-known
party
and they always focus on the good side of that party and defame other parties even if they are doing better. So, Fix the agreement mistake
parties
that is
why people
have trust issues with the media and they do not have any interest in worldwide news
as long as they are providing one sided
information.
In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion that if the Add a hyphen
one-sided
news
is reaching to
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viewrs
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viewers
is
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correct
and is not manipulated, Change the word
correctly
then
being able to get news
from the other parts of the world is not less than a blessing, but if they are not working honestly for the people
, i do not think so individuals will prefer to watch the global news
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure to maintain consistent use of capital letters, especially at the beginning of each sentence and for proper nouns.
Coherence & Cohesion
Develop topic sentences more clearly to enhance logical distribution of ideas across paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Improve grammatical accuracy to minimize small errors in your writing.
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Clarify some ideas further for the reader's better understanding. More clarity will aid in delivering comprehensive arguments.
Coherence & Cohesion
Clear introduction and conclusion that effectively structure the essay.
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Relevant examples used to support main points, such as the example of the coronavirus and its global impact.
Task Achievement
Addresses both views of the topic, providing a balanced discussion.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.