The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates how much money in percentages of GDP healthcare was spent money in different European countries in 2002,2007,2012 2012.
Overall
,it is clear that
,
the expenses of GDP in some European countries remained Remove the comma
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stable
all
period but most of them fluctuated during the Change preposition
for all
years
. Estonia spent the least but uniformity throughout the all years
. The healthcare expenditure
of Switzerland was the highest during all periods without fluctuation. Whereas
France had high expenditure
but it was hitting the highest point
in 2007.
Regarding the highest expenditure
of GDP in Switzerland and Belgium, it was almost 11% and 10% respectively throughout the all years
. Meanwhile, France hit the highest point
of expenditure
in 2007 considerably plummeting to 11.5%, the Netherlands reached a low point
of 9% this
year. Denmark and Norway experienced 10% in 2012 but decreased to 9% in 2002 and 2007. Whereas
Luxembourg reached the highest point
in these years
8
%.
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In contrast
, Estonia spent the least money nearly 3% in all years
. Spain also
had the same amount of healthcare expenditure
roughly 8% throughout the years
. However
, Lithuania,Poland and Slovenia had the highest percentage of expenditure
in 2012 6%,7%,and 6% respectively, there was a dip in spending in 2002 and 2007 with the lowest point
in Lithuania at nearly 5%.Submitted by dovhanhelen2020 on
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