The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the amount of people paying visits to a fixed island of the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017.
In 2010, less than 0.5
million
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of
visitors preferred staying on the ship. After reaching the 0.5 mark, the Change preposition
apply
number
went to bit downward in 2012 and Use synonyms
then
got a gradual boost and ended with 2 Linking Words
million
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of
travellers by 2017.
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apply
On the other hand
, more than 0.5 Linking Words
million
tourists were fond of staying on the island at the beginning of the timeline. The Use synonyms
number
reached a peak in 2013 with 1.5 Use synonyms
million
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of
tourists, Change preposition
apply
then
got a plateau from 2013 to 2015 until the Linking Words
number
decreased to less than 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2016. Use synonyms
Then
it increased a bit and settled at the 1.5 Linking Words
million
mark. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the total Linking Words
number
got an obvious growth throughout the years where the starting point was exactly 1 Use synonyms
million
and the ending point was 3.5 Use synonyms
million
tourists in 2017.
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Overall
, in the beginning, staying on the island was very popular among the visitors which gradually decreased Linking Words
while
the idea of staying on a cruise ship became more comfortable to the travellers as time Linking Words
flowed
. Meanwhile, the total Verb problem
passed
number
increased Use synonyms
at the end
of the timeline.Linking Words
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