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Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their handwriting skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?

#schools #children #skills #trend
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Some schools believe that enhancing
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 techniques is unnecessary because digital platforms have played
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 era. In my opinion, prioritizing notable is crucial for students
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 the audience would prefer the essays with well-organized writing rather than messy
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 since it is more accessible and understandable. It can
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letters, words or sentences. It does not only affect personal life but it
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 is seen as a wrong number for the address which leads to incorrect transportation
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mistakes in work life, if doctors write
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prescriptions with chaotic letters, medical professionals will give
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inaccurate medical to
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patients leads to dangerous effects. Improving
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 is
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 for young people.
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 of every tuition should preserve the
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 system in every grade level owning
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the pupils should be educated to boost
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. Even though learners are more
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, developing techniques of
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 provides various
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task response
Ensure your essay directly addresses all parts of the prompt. Consider comparing both advantages and disadvantages before forming a well-rounded conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly by using well-defined paragraphs for various points. Transition words could improve flow.
task response
Your essay successfully discusses the importance of handwriting in both personal and professional contexts.
coherence cohesion
The essay introduces the topic effectively and concludes with a strong summarization.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Digital literacy
  • Fine motor skills
  • Inclusion
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Memory retention
  • Coordination
  • Cultural heritage
  • Detachment
  • Modern workplace
  • Inclusive education system
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