The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the estimated percentages of
males
and
females
who did not have
literacy
in several
regions
last
year.
Overall
,
males
had more
literacy
than
females
in all
regions
. In developed countries, either male or female had the most
literacy
compared to other
regions
, especially South Asia which had the highest rate of illiteracy. South Asia had the lowest number of
males
and
females
with
literacy
at approximately 35% and 55% respectively.
following
this
, the Arab States had the second highest rate of female illiteracy at just above 50% and below 30% for
males
.
while
in Sub-Saharan Africa, it was the
males
that recorded as the second highest at around one-third and below half for the
females
.
On the other hand
, the other
regions
had a significantly smaller percentage of illiteracy. In Developed Countries, it
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2% for both genders. Followed by Latin America at one-tenth for
males
and 2% higher for
females
. At least, 1 out of 5
females
in East Asia were unable to read, and around 1 out of 10 for the other gender.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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