The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the estimated percentages of
males
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and
females
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who did not have
literacy
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in several
regions
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last
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year.
Overall
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,
males
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had more
literacy
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than
females
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in all
regions
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. In developed countries, either male or female had the most
literacy
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compared to other
regions
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, especially South Asia which had the highest rate of illiteracy. South Asia had the lowest number of
males
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and
females
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with
literacy
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at approximately 35% and 55% respectively.
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, the Arab States had the second highest rate of female illiteracy at just above 50% and below 30% for
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.
while
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in Sub-Saharan Africa, it was the
males
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that recorded as the second highest at around one-third and below half for the
females
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.
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, the other
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had a significantly smaller percentage of illiteracy. In Developed Countries, it
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2% for both genders. Followed by Latin America at one-tenth for
males
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and 2% higher for
females
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. At least, 1 out of 5
females
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in East Asia were unable to read, and around 1 out of 10 for the other gender.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, literacy, regions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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