Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

believe that raising the cost of fuel is the solution to protect the global environment, I agree that

this

method can tackle the issue;

however

, in my

opinion

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there are

another

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other

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better

way

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ways

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to address the problem. Nowadays,

people

are more likely to use private vehicles as a main transport which emits

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pollution

in

the

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urban areas. Increasing the

fuel’s

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fuel

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price allows

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the commuter

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commuter

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commuters

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to use

the

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public transport

such

as trains and trams to save

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money.

This

strategy can affect not only the drivers but

also

the company that

produce

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produces

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carbon

leads

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leading

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to the

changing

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in those businesses to provide

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renewable energy

instead

for example

contributing wind or solar power which is environmentally friendly.

However

, to prevent the emission of bad

pollution

can be used in the laws,

enacting

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strict legislation

or

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for the companies that

overpollute

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over pollute

carbon or

people

who overuse cars

for

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example

setting

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custodial sentences or

given

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fines.

This

measure can lead

people

to be more aware of emitting

pollution

and saving the environment. Another measure is to add the global environmental subject in

educational

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the educational

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system in every school,

this

can be beneficial for the long-term since the students are educated to acknowledge the

essential

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essentials

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of the environment

along with

the reason

of

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for

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causing the

pollution

problems.

To sum up

, raising the price of fuel might tackle the issue.

Even

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though

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I believe that there are other protocols that should be implemented

for

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, for

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instance, educating the global impact and legislation for emitting

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carbon.