The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wite at least 150 words.

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The following diagram compares the public library two decades ago and how it is transformed nowadays.

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, it clearly highlights the changes that happened in the library designs,

in addition

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to some facilities that have been constructed,

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, the tables and chairs section which was in the middle of the library has been removed. Looking closely at the map, from the eastern

side

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of the entrance, a cafe has been replaced

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of the inquiry desk,

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the adult fiction books section has been shifted to the opposite

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;

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At the end

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of the corridor on the right

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, a lecture room has been erected in place of the children's room. Turning to the southern

side

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of the entrance, the CDs, videos, and computer games section has been expanded and recognized into several sections,

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sofas have been added. Storytelling has been introduced. By going towards the entrance, all reference books and the computer room have been constructed.

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