The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wite at least 150 words.
The following diagram compares the public library two decades ago and how it is transformed nowadays.
Overall
, it clearly highlights the changes that happened in the library designs, in addition
to some facilities that have been constructed, however
, the tables and chairs section which was in the middle of the library has been removed.
Looking closely at the map, from the eastern side
of the entrance, a cafe has been replaced instead
of the inquiry desk, while
the adult fiction books section has been shifted to the opposite side
; however
, At the end
of the corridor on the right side
, a lecture room has been erected in place of the children's room.
Turning to the southern side
of the entrance, the CDs, videos, and computer games section has been expanded and recognized into several sections, whereas
sofas have been added. Storytelling has been introduced. By going towards the entrance, all reference books and the computer room have been constructed.Submitted by talahakoura27 on
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