The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate the ages of the populations of
Yemen
and Italy comparing
between 2000 and 2050. It is readily Wrong verb form
compared
appearent
that the age between 15-59 Correct your spelling
apparent
years
is the largest number of almost all populations except in 2000 of
Change preposition
apply
Yemen
, which is the group lebelled
'0-14 Correct your spelling
labelled
rebelled
years
' instead
.
At the beginning of the period, over a
half of Yemeni people were Correct article usage
apply
the
youths at 50.1%, Correct article usage
apply
while
the others mainly consisted of 46.3% of the adults, and the smallest group as
the seniors at 3.6%. Correct your spelling
was
However
, in 2000, Italians' greatest amount of citizens conversely
was the
middle age range at 61.6%, Change preposition
in the
following
Wrong verb form
followed
with
almost a quarter of the elder people at 24.1%, which was almost 8 times bigger than those in Change preposition
by
Yemen
, and the children as the least population at 14.3% instead
.
Moving on to the subsequent 50 years
, in Yemen
, the category defined as '15-59 years
' and '60+ years
' will increase to 57.3% and 5.7%, respectively, whereas
the reduction to 37.0% of kids is predicted. Moreover
, by a half decade later, 60+ years
age
will Change preposition
of age
has
risen to 42.3%, Change the verb form
have
while
the remaining adults and juveniles will have fallen to 46.2% and 11.6%, which will be lower than those in Yemen
at that time.
On the whole, even though there is a growing trend of aging
people by time presented in both countries, the largest populations of both in 2050 Change the spelling
ageing
is
estimated as citizens at 15 to 59 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
years
old.Submitted by wee_wongphrom on
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