The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen

and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate the ages of the populations of
Yemen
and Italy
comparing
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between 2000 and 2050. It is readily
appearent
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apparent
that the age between 15-59
years
is the largest number of almost all populations except in 2000
of
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Yemen
, which is the group
lebelled
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labelled
rebelled
'0-14
years
'
instead
. At the beginning of the period, over
a
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half of Yemeni people were
the
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youths at 50.1%,
while
the others mainly consisted of 46.3% of the adults, and the smallest group
as
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the seniors at 3.6%.
However
, in 2000, Italians' greatest amount of citizens
conversely
was
the
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in the
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middle age range at 61.6%,
following
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with
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almost a quarter of the elder people at 24.1%, which was almost 8 times bigger than those in
Yemen
, and the children as the least population at 14.3%
instead
. Moving on to the subsequent 50
years
, in
Yemen
, the category defined as '15-59
years
' and '60+
years
' will increase to 57.3% and 5.7%, respectively,
whereas
the reduction to 37.0% of kids is predicted.
Moreover
, by a half decade later, 60+
years
age
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of age
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will
has
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risen to 42.3%,
while
the remaining adults and juveniles will have fallen to 46.2% and 11.6%, which will be lower than those in
Yemen
at that time. On the whole, even though there is a growing trend of
aging
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people by time presented in both countries, the largest populations of both in 2050
is
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estimated as citizens at 15 to 59
years
old.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • young population
  • mature population
  • aging society
  • demographic shift
  • proportion
  • dominant
  • balanced distribution
  • projected increase
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