The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

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Firstly

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, the

table

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gives information regarding consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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, we have five countries. These are

Ireland

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, Italy, Spain,

Sweden

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and Turkey and we have three categories. These are

Food

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Drinks

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Tobacco

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, Clothing/ Footwear and

Leisure

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Education

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, when we look at the panel Turkey has a 32.14% rate in

Food

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Drinks

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Tobacco

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This

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rate is the most high ratio in 2002’s

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. After that Spain was 1.98% in

Leisure

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Education

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is the lowest ratio in the

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. Later on,

Sweden

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had a 15.77% rate in

Food

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Drinks

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Tobacco

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and 3.22% in

Leisure

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Education

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, Italy is more over than

Sweden

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Food

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Drinks

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Tobacco

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Nevertheless

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Sweden

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is higher than in

Leisure

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Education

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Also

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Ireland

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has average rates in the

table

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Ireland

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was 6.43% in clothing/ Footwear.

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, the diagram which is above mentioned describes the percentage of national consumer expenditure by category in 2002. From my point of view, I strongly believe that the

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rates are 32.14% in

Food

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Drinks

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and

Tobacco

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, 9.00% in Clothing/ Footwear, and 4.35% in

Leisure

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Education

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. Taking everything into account Turkey and

Ireland

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have high rates in 2002’s

table

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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, ireland, sweden, food, drinks, tobacco, leisure, education with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

196 words

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