The graph below shows the numbe of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The graph illustrates the figures of markets that are closed
while
others are opened in one region from 2011 until 2018. To begin
with, it is clear that
the number
of openings started at the highest point in 2001 rather than the closures.
Firstly
, the number
of shops
opened at approximately 8500 then
dramatically plummeted in 2012 moreover
, had grew significantly in 2014 to reach 6000 shops
after that dropped again to 4000 shops
but remained stable until 2017 to decrease again.
On the other hand
, closed shops
had begun with between 6000 and 6300 since the year then
had
increased regularly to achieve the highest Unnecessary verb
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number
in 2013 after that remain dropped until had
its lowest point in 2015 which is nearly zero. Verb problem
it reached
However
, the numbers rose significantly until reached a stability point over the years.
overall
, The lines describe upward and downward numbers that explain there are no fixed number
of shops
and the country has improved over the years .Submitted by Poiu on
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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