Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
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The map illustrates the two hypothetical sites to lodge a new supermarket in Garlsdon's
town
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.
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, the village features a diverse landscape which is composed of a rural
area
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, an industrial zone, a housing
area
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and a
town
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centre. There are two noticeable locations for the new supermarket.In fact, the illustration highlights the possibility of settling in the countryside, precisely on the
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road going to Hindon
town
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, located at 12km from our pueblo. The second
area
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to house the project is the centre of the
town
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, which is an exclusive pedestrian zone. The 2 aforementioned choices have each one pours and cons.Indeed, the establishment of an amenity like that has to be accessible for at least,half of the 65 000 inhabitants of the
town
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. In
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matter, the location in the middle of the
town
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seems to be idealistic.
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, vehicles are not allowed to enter that
area
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which makes shopping less convenient.The Second site is achievable by car
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, it is suitable for the purchase of a larger quantity of goods.
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