The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of

Brandfield.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.
The map highlights two hypothetical sites to lodge a new shopping mall in Brandfield's
city
.
Overall
, The
city
is compartmentalized in two parts by the
river
. The two chosen areas to house the mall are on both sides of the
river
. The
city
seems to be well equipped by featuring some leisure amenities
such
as a golf course in addition to a park.
Furthermore
, there are transport connectivities
such
as roads and a railway to link the numerous zones that form the landscape.In fact, there is an industrial estate located in the
south-eastern
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city
plus a housing area in the northern zone, on the other side of the
river
. The town's centre, meanwhile, surrounds the
river
. The first site to accommodate the new market is established in the north, near the housing estate.The second one
,
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would be settled in the southern
city
, near the industrial zone. Both choices may be strategic
due to
the fact that
,
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they are alike accessible by train or by vehicles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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