The first line graph shows the average world oil price for each year from 1970 to 2005.The secong chart shows the top six oil exporting countries and how much they export each day.

The first line graph shows the average world oil price for each year from 1970 to 2005.The secong chart shows the top six oil exporting countries and how much they export each day.
There are two figures that display the
oil
information.
Firstly
,the line graph illustrates how much world
oil
costs on average from the
year
1970 to 2005.
Secondly
,the bar chart presents six countries that sent out
oil
the most per
day
in 2005.
Overall
,it can be seen that the world
oil
prices fluctuated with the most expensive values in the
year
1980 and the most
oil
exporting country was Saudi Arabia. Looking at the line graph,their prices started with a small minority which was less than 10.Before the
the
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year
1975, those prices were exponentially increasing to reach a peak at just under 90 which was followed by dropping substantially between the
year
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1980-1985 to 30.After that
year
,their costs fluctuated between 15-35.
Finally
, before the
year
2005,they rose continuingly. Moving onto the bar chart,Clearly,The most exporting was Saudi Arabia,accounting for 9 million barrels each
day
.The second most followed closely was Russia,responsible for 7 million per
day
.The other countries had nearly the same number,consisting of Nigeria,United Arab Emirates,Iran and Norway which were around 2-3 million each
day
.
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