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Organizing a large family celebrations, such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?

#celebrations #event
These days,
increasing
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 number of people are making
choice
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choices
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 to celebrate huge events.
For example
, a marriage ceremony could
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generate
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plenty of issues in terms of conflicts and misunderstanding.If pondered, there are several
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 causes of
this
;
however
, some steps could remedy
this
 situation. Several underlying reasons could be attributed
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such
 a phenomenon. The most pivotal
one
 is that it can create conflict between individuals in order to render
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suggestions
.
In other words
, if they would
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systematize
 any event, it
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 require a lot of people to
work
 on various
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such
 as
,
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 decoration, food,
sitting
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 arrangements and so on. To put it simply, for that festivity each family
members
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are
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 giving their ideas about How to decorate,
decideing
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deciding
 food
menue
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menu
and
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etc. For
intance
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instance
, if each person can give different suggestions on
one
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particular
 thing, which can
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 to
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 fight.
Nonetheless
, it can be curbed by some
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appropriate
 preventive measures.
Firstly
, they have to allocate
work
. By
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 I mean that in order to stop conflict, it is essential
as well as
 beneficial for them to
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divide
decide
one
work
 for
one
 person. To add to
this
,
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one
 can decide about
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 colour and
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other
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 can decide about snacks and drinks. To
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exemplify
, if
every
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one
 knows their part, they can focus on
one
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particular
 thing and
this
 not only
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 their time but
alleviate
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alleviates
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 misunderstanding. In conclusion,
admittedely
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admittedly
,
this
 is mainly
cause
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 by less
of
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communication and
misunderstaning
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misunderstanding
misunderstandings
;
however
,
this
 could be controlled by appropriate monitoring. I believe that
allocationg
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allocating
allocation
work
 is the best solution.
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language
Ensure accurate spelling and grammar to improve clarity. For example, correct words like 'genrate' to 'generate' and 'systamatize' to 'systematize'.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your ideas, which will strengthen your task response score.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that transition words are used effectively to improve logical flow.
structure
The essay includes a clear introduction and conclusion, summarizing the main points effectively.
coherence
There is a logical distribution of ideas across the essay, with clear sections to tackle different aspects of the question.
task achievement
You've identified the issues well and proposed a viable solution of work allocation to manage such family events, illustrating a solid understanding of the topic.

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