The bar graph below shows basic information about uses of leisure time among different age groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The bar graph illustrates
hours
of use of free time
by a variety groups
of age per Correct the article-noun agreement
a variety group
variety groups
day
in the United Kingdom. Also
, how they spend this
time
either alone or with others
. Firstly
, 8 to 15 years have the highest Free time
hours
spent with others
with approximately 5 hours
per day
but they spend the lowest time
alone which is one hour.
Followed by, the elders from 65 years and over who spend 4 and a half hours
alone per day
. Furthermore
, 55 to 64 and 16 to 24 groups have similar hours
which is around 4 hours
per day
with others
, also
, they have the same hours
spent alone. However
, the hours
are growing regularly for 25 to 54 groups both with others
and alone there are 25 to 34 and 35 44 have the same hours
in both but it is rising to 45 to 54.
Overall
, the graph describes the fluctuating of numbers oh leisure time
spent per day
by different people.Submitted by Poiu on
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