Many jobs that are done by people are now done by machines and computers. Some people that this is a positive development while others feel this is a negative for society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, many

jobs

are done by

computers

and

machines

, which were done by

humans

before. Some people think that it is a positive development

while

others believe that it is a negative development. I personally believe that

while

conducting

jobs

by

humans

is useful because nothing can be compared to human intelligence, doing

jobs

with the

help

of

machines

and

computers

is helpful because it saves

time

and

energy

. Doing

jobs

with the

help

of

humans

is effective because

humans

have a

high-level

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of intelligence.

Humans

have emotional intelligence which they can apply to their performance. They can utilize their

creativities

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and problem-solving skills to complete their

tasks

effectively, and lots of sectors are fully dependent on

human-driven

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workforce.

For example

, the education sector requires human examiners to evaluate the assessments of students and

computers

are unable to do

this

task.

However

, I personally believe that human cannot complete their

tasks

in a timely manner, and completing

tasks

also

requires a lot of effort.

Computers

and

machines

are more helpful to complete

tasks

because they save

time

and

energy

.

Computers

and

machines

can do their

tasks

on

time

according to

their

programmings

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. It saves the

time

and

energy

of

humans

and

complete

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the

tasks

effectively.

For example

, there are several writing evaluation services available, which just take around 2 to 3 seconds to evaluate the writings of the students. Students do not have to wait for the evaluations for days and they can receive their

feedbacks

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feedback

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on

time

.

Therefore

, I personally believe that completing

tasks

with the

help

of

computers

and

machines

is more useful. In conclusion, I personally believe that we should complete our

tasks

with the

help

of

machines

and

computers

rather

then

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humans

. Because it saves

time

and

energy

of

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humans

.