The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates
about
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language-based
jobs
, paid in US
dollars
in five cities annually.
Overall
,
Toronto
spent the most money on language-based
jobs
,
while
Mexico
spent the least amount annually on language
jobs
. The interpreter job curve shows
increasing
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an increasing
the increasing
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pattern, starting from 18000 in
Mexico
being the lowest and reaching 80000
dollars
in
Toronto
, being the highest.
While
graph stays steady between 60000 US
dollars
to 750000 US
dollars
in Dubai, Paris and Munich. The annual income of language teacher job curve shows fluctuations,
Mexico
being the lowest paid (15000) and
Toronto
being the highest,
that is
65000 US
dollars
. Dubai and Munich
shows
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the same amount of annual income for language teacher
jobs
,
that is
60000 US
dollars
. Paris, Munich and
Toronto
paid more than 60000 US
dollars
to translators,
while
Mexico
paid the least
dollars
to them (19000).
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words jobs, dollars, toronto, mexico with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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