The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of vehicle ownership production in different places in 2015.
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, a pie chart shows that China is top with 25 per cent and we can see the massive difference with 2 per cent in the Middle East and Africa. Linking Words
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