Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are opinions that conflict with experts
such
as doctors and engineers who should work
in the country
where they did their training. While
some people
believe they can work
in another country
they want. This
essay will discuss these points of view and argue on this
topic.
Some people
think that everyone has the freedom to choose to work
anywhere due to
it is a basic right and should not enforce
. Wrong verb form
be enforced
Besides
, there are several reasons this
is an advantage if people
work
another
place. Change preposition
in another
Firstly
, have the occasion to develop yourself whereas
learning in a new working society. Change preposition
while
Secondly
, high salaries and welfare that
support many matters.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
, some people
believe that they should not leave the country
when graduated
because it will bring knowledge and skills to develop in the area where they live. Wrong verb form
graduate
For example
, computer engineering learns about the design and creation systems of computers, civil
engineering learns about
Construction Correct word choice
and civil
such
as building, bridges, roads, and transportation systems which
these skills can be used to benefit the Correct pronoun usage
apply
country
. In addition
, since covid-19
disease spread Correct your spelling
COVID-19
makes
many doctors must be hard working and infected with Verb problem
apply
a
Correct article usage
the
covid-19
disease. Correct your spelling
COVID-19
As a result
, doctors have a lot of shortages at present and this
is another reason that some people
do not want them to move to another job.
To sum up
, in my view, we should not enforce
them to Verb problem
force
work
in a country
forever if they have got an occasion to have a new experience and access the advanced technology in another country
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Example and Explanation Enhancement
Try to elaborate more on specific examples and explanations in each paragraph to make your arguments more convincing. For instance, you began an excellent point regarding civil engineers contributing to infrastructure but did not fully explain how their absence impacts their home country's development.
Task Fulfilment
Make sure to cover all parts of the asked task more comprehensively. While you have discussed the views and provided a personal opinion, strengthening the argument for each with clear, specific examples can bolster your response.
Introduction and Conclusion
Your essay presents a clear introduction and conclusion, setting up the discussion nicely and summarizing your stance well.
Clear Structure and Stance
The essay provides a structured view of both arguments before presenting your opinion, which makes your stance clear.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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