Due to the global shift towards remote learning, many students face challenges due to the digital divide. Discuss the impact of limited access to technology on students' learning outcomes and propose solutions to bridge this gap in education.

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years
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,
educational
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process has transformed from traditional classes to distance learning, some
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impact experiences with
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technology. There are numerous problems and there are certain measures to be taken to resolve them. First of all, remote learning implies
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a digital device.
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, it's not affordable for each student. In my opinion, the best solution is providing a right of selection, it follows that a student may choose
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way.
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, if a student is unable to buy a
computer
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he or she may attend classes offline. Another way to solve that issue is to set up
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computer
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сlassroom
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classroom
at the university where
students
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may use the classroom for educational
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. As
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learning programs, modern education requires modern technologies
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as a
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other devices. For some curriculums in the university is necessary to own a powerful
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or a tablet for undergoing an educational process and those gadgets may cost
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amount of money.
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, if learners want to apply
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any
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courses, they should be ready for significant expenses
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as a new contemporary tablet for creating
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designers
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layout. Almost the same situation in the information technology sector. In my opinion, the best solution
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this
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case is to provide a device from
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during the educational semesters, it will help to support the
students
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in their beginnings. In conclusion, I tend to think that
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assistance from educational
centers
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is necessary for
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students
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whom
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unable
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are unable
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to arrange their studying process.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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