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The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. »

The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. »
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The given bar chart demonstrates the statistics for crime in five countries: Great
Britain
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,
Australia
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, New
Zealand
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,
United
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the United
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States
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, and
Canada
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during
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for
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 50 years.
Overall
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, it is remarkable that there were fluctuations in
United
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the United
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States
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 and
Canada
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,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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 the minority of statistics was in
Britain
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,
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however
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however,
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 it experienced an upward trend. Starting from 1930, the highest amount of imprisonment was in
Canada
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whereas
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Britain
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 was recorded at around 25, which was the lowest.
Moreover
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, the
number
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numbers
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 in
United
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the United
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States
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 and New
Zealand
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 were equal. In 1940,
top
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the top
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 figure
turn
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 to be
United
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the United
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States
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. Surprisingly, figures in
Britain
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,
Australia
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, and New
Zealand
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 were
increase
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increased
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 gradually during 30 years
periods
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period
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. The amount of figures in
Canada
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 accounted for around 115 in 1950. Turning to 1960, the record number of
United
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the United
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States
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 and
Canada
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 accounted for around 128 and 100, respectively. In 1970, the statistics in
Britain
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,
Australia
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, and New
Zealand
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 were equal at approximately 65,
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however
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however,
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 there were only
Britain
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 and New
Zealand
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 that
climbing
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climbed
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 in 1980.
Although
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 there
were
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was
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uphill
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an uphill
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 trend in
four
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the four
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 countries,
Australia
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only
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was only
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 the one that had
downward
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a downward
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 trend.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words britain, australia, zealand, states, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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