You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The pictures above show two maps from an undefined island, before and after the production of some tourist
centers
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centres
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there. There is no given information about the date.
To begin
with, the map from the past illustrates a basic land with a length of around 200 meters, which has a small beach and a
walk
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walking
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path in it.
Also
, there can be seen a bunch of trees, which seem to be coconut trees.
On the other hand
, we have the map from the present that showcases the big changes that took place in the period.
In contrast
, there have been two accommodation sites added to the island with footpaths around them that stretch to the beach.
In addition
, a restaurant was
also
built with a vehicle road that leads to the reception building and the pier, respectively.
To sum up
, some wind boats are included for
the
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travelers
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travellers
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.
Finally
, the fact that trees have not been cut down is a nice thing to witness.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Before and after
  • Tourist facilities
  • Infrastructure development
  • Geographical location
  • Natural resources
  • Landmarks
  • Newly constructed
  • Transportation and accessibility
  • Leisure centers
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation efforts
  • Socio-economic impacts
  • Employment opportunities
  • Local populations
  • Accommodation facilities
  • Economic development
  • Route networks
  • Hospitality industry
  • Tourism influx
  • Eco-friendly solutions
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