What are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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Your essay should respond fully to all parts of the question. Ensure that every point made is well-explained and clearly relates back to your argument or theme. You have covered both advantages and disadvantages, but make sure each point is as clear and strong as possible.
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Provide more relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience to enhance your arguments. This helps to demonstrate greater depth of understanding.
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Continue to structure your essay into clear paragraphs with a clear introduction and conclusion. Ensure that these sections clearly introduce and summarize the main points of your essay.
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coherence cohesion
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