You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Jaldip
I hope
this
letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant ealth
. I am very happy to Correct your spelling
health
listen
from you that you are taking Verb problem
hear
driving
Correct article usage
a driving
licence
. Believe me
driving Add a comma
me,
licence
plays crucial
role in our routine life. As it makes our life very easy and convenient. Add an article
a crucial
Beside
that, We can make our plan by our availability. That meansReplace the word
Besides
,
We have not wait for public transport.
In the Remove the comma
apply
last
month, My sister got driving
Correct article usage
a driving
licence
and she is very satisfied with her driving school and instructor too. She took class
from " Drive your Dream" school which is located over the city hospital. Fix the agreement mistake
classes
There
instructors are very cool with beginner students so I think it will be helpful for you.
In the Correct your spelling
Their
last
, having a driving licence
is not a big deal. But, there are many others
tips which Correct quantifier usage
other
i
would Change the capitalization
I
like
share with you. first and Add the particle
like to
for
most Change preposition
apply
is
Correct word choice
important is
that
always follow traffic Correct word choice
apply
signal
. Fix the agreement mistake
signals
Also
, never drive overspeed. and last
but not least, Drink and Drive is criminal
act so always avoid Add an article
a criminal
to do
that.
I hope Change the verb form
doing
this
all information prove
Correct subject-verb agreement
proves
boon
for you.
Your lovely
UrvashiCorrect article usage
a boon
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task achievement
Pay attention to small grammar and spelling mistakes, such as 'ealth' instead of 'health', or capitalization errors. It's also important to maintain parallel structure in sentences.
coherence cohesion
Consider structuring paragraphs so that each one focuses on a single main idea. This will make your letter more coherent and easily understandable.
task achievement
You've successfully conveyed the main advantages of having a driving license and given a recommendation for a good driving school.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-organized with a proper opening and closing, creating a friendly and helpful tone.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,