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The table above gives information about the amount of tax collectev(as% GPD) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.

The table above gives information about the amount of tax collectev(as% GPD) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.
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The table provides data about the quantity of accumulating
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tax related to GDP in various
countries
 over the
period
30
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of 30
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years
 from 1975 to 2005. Units are measured in
percentage
. As
an
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 general trend, at the beginning of the
period
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period,
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 Sweden
was leading
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had a higher
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 position
than
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 other places
thoughout
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throughout
 the year
whereas
,
remaining
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the remaining
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countries
 demonstrated almost equal
percentage
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percentages
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 in four different
years
. In detail, in 1975 and 1985
years
Sweden
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 tax collectors
was
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 46%
nad
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and
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 47% respectively,
however
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decade
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 experienced 51% and
incase
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 rapidly to 70,1% in 2005. The next country is
USA
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the USA
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 the highest second
propotion
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proportion
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was
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 25,1% in 1975.
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 the
years
 ,
USA
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the USA
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 showed
negligible
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a negligible
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rose
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 and remained struck at 27%
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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. The remaining
countries
,
Korea
, Japan
nad
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Turkey
 stood at
equal
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percentage
 of 15 -16 in 1975. In comparison ,
Korea
 experienced a significant increase to 27% than both
countries
 , at that time Japan rose only 1 % and
Turkey
 plummeted 15%. In the half of the
period
 ,
Korea
was
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declined to 26% , yet Japan and
Turkey
 remarkable growth to 23 % and 24%.
AT
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 the end of the year ,
Korea
nad
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and
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Turkey
proportions
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proportion
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32,1
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of 32,1
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% and became
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the
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second largest
percentage
 with Sweden in 2005.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, period, years, percentage, korea, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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