It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is been said that purchasing fewer
high value
dresses is better Add a hyphen
high-value
instead
of a lot of cheaper ones. I completely agree with this
Idea for three compelling reasons.
The first reason is that most of the time more expensive clothes
have better material, so they last
longer
period of timeAdd an article
a longer
usable
. Cheap Correct word choice
apply
clothes
although
provide more variety for us, they lose their shape and their firs
look after several Correct your spelling
first
usage
. Change to a plural noun
usages
For example
, If you buy a cheap pair of shoos
, after a Correct your spelling
shoes
while
you can observe that it lost it's
shape and you do not feel the initial Replace the word
its
comfortability
in it.
The second reason is that by paying for cheap Replace the word
comfort
clothes
, it may raise some health problems like alergy
which they cause Correct your spelling
allergies
due to
their poor quality
. For instance
, last
year I bought a fake Goochi jacket. After a
several Correct article usage
apply
usage
, some red spots Change to a plural noun
usages
apeared
on my skin. I went to the hospital and when Correct your spelling
appeared
doctor
saw the spots said they Add an article
the doctor
are
because of that jacket. We should be careful about the materials of Wrong verb form
were
such
clothes
if we care about our health.
The last
but not least reason we should avoid buying low
Add a hyphen
low-quality
quality
clothes
is redusing
Correct your spelling
reducing
wast
we produce by Correct your spelling
waste
throughing
away Correct your spelling
throwing
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
clothes
due to
they lost their initial quality
. When you buy several poor quality
items instead
of one expensive high quality
clothe
, as you do not like them after a Change the form of the verb
clothing
while
and finally
you put them in the bin, you produce a lot of waste that can harm the Add a comma
finally,
encironment
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
environment
although
we have to pay more for high
Add a hyphen
high-quality
quality
clothes
, we should buy them instead
of lots of cheaper ones for following
reasons: they do not lose their Correct article usage
the following
quality
easily and we can use them for a long time, health issues may occure
Correct your spelling
occur
occurs
due to
the poor quality
of cheap clothes
and by purchasing less number of expensive dresses rather than lots of cheaper ones, we can reduce the amount of waste we produce.Submitted by jingelbing on
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