It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is been said that purchasing fewer
high value
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dresses is better
instead
of a lot of cheaper ones. I completely agree with
this
Idea for three compelling reasons. The first reason is that most of the time more expensive
clothes
have better material, so they
last
longer
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period of time
usable
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. Cheap
clothes
although
provide more variety for us, they lose their shape and their
firs
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first
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look after several
usage
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.
For example
, If you buy a cheap pair of
shoos
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shoes
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, after a
while
you can observe that it lost
it's
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shape and you do not feel the initial
comfortability
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in it. The second reason is that by paying for cheap
clothes
, it may raise some health problems like
alergy
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allergies
which they cause
due to
their poor
quality
.
For instance
,
last
year I bought a fake Goochi jacket. After
a
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several
usage
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usages
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, some red spots
apeared
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appeared
on my skin. I went to the hospital and when
doctor
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saw the spots said they
are
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were
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because of that jacket. We should be careful about the materials of
such
clothes
if we care about our health. The
last
but not least reason we should avoid buying
low
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low-quality
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quality
clothes
is
redusing
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reducing
wast
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we produce by
throughing
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throwing
away
these kind
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of
clothes
due to
they lost their initial
quality
. When you buy several poor
quality
items
instead
of one expensive high
quality
clothe
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clothing
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, as you do not like them after a
while
and
finally
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finally,
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you put them in the bin, you produce a lot of waste that can harm the
encironment
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environment
. In conclusion,
although
we have to pay more for
high
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quality
clothes
, we should buy them
instead
of lots of cheaper ones for
following
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the following
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reasons: they do not lose their
quality
easily and we can use them for a long time, health issues may
occure
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occur
occurs
due to
the poor
quality
of cheap
clothes
and by purchasing less number of expensive dresses rather than lots of cheaper ones, we can reduce the amount of waste we produce.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • long-lasting
  • cost-per-wear
  • economical
  • investing
  • ethical manufacturing
  • transparent
  • exclusivity
  • designs
  • mass-produced
  • accessibility
  • budget
  • fast fashion
  • trends
  • maintenance
  • dry cleaning
  • social status
  • psychological implications
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