The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Write 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Write 150 words.
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The following bar chart depicts the proportion of the
share
of five different industries of the economy of Brazil in 2009 and 2019
as well as
a prediction for 2029.
Overall
, the
share
percentage of finance has always been the highest in the Brazilian economy where the food processing unit had the lowest portion until the manufacturing industry is expected to be the lowest in the upcoming year.
However
, finance had the largest number at the beginning of 2009 with a bit higher than 30%
while
the energy
sector
and tourism both were the second highest with 25% approximately. Meanwhile, the food processing
sector
had 10% of the total
share
which was the lowest.
On the other hand
, the finance and energy
sector
held their previous positions in 2009
also
with more than 35% and 30% respectively, when the tourism and food processing zones shared the same amount of
share
which was 20% and the manufacturing industry came down to 15% almost.
Lastly
,
according to
the prediction, the top two positions are expected to be the same with more than 40% and 25% consecutively
while
the manufacturing
sector
is at risk of experiencing a significant fall of 5% in 2029.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words share, sector with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage share
  • economic growth
  • industry forecast
  • notable growth
  • decline
  • steady growth
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • economic landscape
  • industry sector
  • projected growth
  • consumer preferences
  • technological advancements
  • industrial transformation
  • mature industry
  • economic policies
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