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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,.

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Dear Editor, I am writing in the context of the news
publised
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published
 in the newspaper. Which made me desolate and concerned. Actually, I read about my co-worker named
as
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Rita, I met her on my first job and worked for 3 years. Since I
know
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have known
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 her
from
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for
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past
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the past
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 6 years, even after not being in contact for 3
yeras
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years
, I bet she is not someone who can sell illegal drugs.
Thus
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,
journling
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journaling
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 about someone without any investigation is wrong and
big
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 No.
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, she is being shown as the partner of the drug dealer. If some employees of a company are found having the restricted substances it does not mean all the employees are at fault.
Furthermore
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, the investigation
about
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 the smuggling case of the workers is still
going
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ongoing
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on
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, it has not been yet declared who
were
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was
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 involved and not.
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, it is best not to make any assumptions or ideas and defame someone as she has a family and her personal life.
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, I would suggest taking your words back and
clear
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 the clouds of confusion so that people
are not being mislead
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are not being misled
are not misleading
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.
Or
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Otherwise
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otherwise
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, I think more conflicts are going to arise soon. I hope you can take the required steps to maintain peace and truth in society. Regards Simran

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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, organize the letter into clear paragraphs focusing on single ideas like introduction, error details, and your expectations.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical flow of information by connecting sentences more smoothly.
task achievement
Refine the tone to match the formal context of writing to an editor, ensuring professionalism throughout the letter.
task achievement
The letter clearly identifies the incorrect information and expresses concern effectively.
coherence cohesion
Your closing is polite and encourages a positive resolution.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inaccuracies
  • rectify
  • misinformation
  • reputation
  • verification
  • editorial integrity
  • correction notice
  • factual error
  • accountability
  • due diligence
  • retraction
  • implications
  • personal acquaintance
  • redress
  • journalistic standards
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