You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,.
Dear Editor,
I am writing in the context of the news
publised
in the newspaper. Which made me desolate and concerned.
Actually, I read about my co-worker named Correct your spelling
published
as
Rita, I met her on my first job and worked for 3 years. Since I Change preposition
apply
know
her Wrong verb form
have known
from
Change preposition
for
past
6 years, even after not being in contact for 3 Correct article usage
the past
yeras
, I bet she is not someone who can sell illegal drugs. Correct your spelling
years
Thus
, journling
about someone without any investigation is wrong and Correct your spelling
journaling
journalling
big
No. Correct article usage
a big
Moreover
, she is being shown as the partner of the drug dealer. If some employees of a company are found having the restricted substances it does not mean all the employees are at fault.
Furthermore
, the investigation about
the smuggling case of the workers is still Change preposition
of
going
Verb problem
ongoing
on
, it has not been yet declared who Change preposition
apply
were
involved and not. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Therefore
, it is best not to make any assumptions or ideas and defame someone as she has a family and her personal life.
Lastly
, I would suggest taking your words back and clear
the clouds of confusion so that people Wrong verb form
clearing
are not being mislead
. Change the verb form
are not being misled
are not misleading
Or
Correct word choice
Otherwise
otherwise
, I think more conflicts are going to arise soon.
I hope you can take the required steps to maintain peace and truth in society.
Regards
SimranSubmitted by preetsimran0123 on
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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, organize the letter into clear paragraphs focusing on single ideas like introduction, error details, and your expectations.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical flow of information by connecting sentences more smoothly.
task achievement
Refine the tone to match the formal context of writing to an editor, ensuring professionalism throughout the letter.
task achievement
The letter clearly identifies the incorrect information and expresses concern effectively.
coherence cohesion
Your closing is polite and encourages a positive resolution.