You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints
Dear Osama , I hope you're doing well ,
Also
i
hope you will Change the capitalization
I
be cooperate
with my problem
Change the verb form
cooperate
Firstly
, I arrived at the
night there weren'Correct article usage
apply
t
any workers in the receptionist it was Correct your spelling
disappointed
disppointed
when Correct your spelling
disappointing
i
couldn'Change the capitalization
I
t
find them , Moreover
the plane was exhausting , I needed to Correct your spelling
receive
recieve
Correct your spelling
receive
me
someone in the hotel to help me and carry my suitcase , I had Correct pronoun usage
apply
been
waiting for long time when the worker came to do the check-in ,
And Unnecessary verb
apply
then
he gave room on 12
Correct article usage
the 12
floor
, The bathroom was broken when Change to a plural noun
floors
i
entered , Change the capitalization
I
Moreover
when Add a comma
Moreover,
i
told the Change the capitalization
I
reception
to fix it they told Replace the word
receptionist
we
Correct pronoun usage
me we
cann'
Wrong verb form
couldn't
t
do anything because the manager wasn't
here
, I have come to your hotel many times , Correct your spelling
there
However
,the last
visited was so disappointing .
Finally
, You have two solutions , The first you have to return my money which you don't
desserve
, Correct your spelling
deserve
Also
you'd better to
take off the manager if you want your hotel Remove the marker
apply
be
successful , the second you ought to give me twenty nights free.
Thank youAdd the particle
to be
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity and presentation.
task achievement
Aim for a polite and professional tone in complaint letters to maintain professionalism.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately included.
task achievement
You addressed all the points requested in the task prompt, ensuring completeness.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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