More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport . What are the reasons for this thread? How can the government encourage people to take public transport?

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Consider outlining the reasons why people prefer private cars and the role of government in promoting public transport more explicitly. Providing a clear structure with introduction, body paragraphs focusing on reasons and solutions, and a conclusion will enhance coherence.
evidence
Include relevant and specific examples to support your points. For example, mention specific inconveniences of public transport or initiatives taken by other governments that have been successful.
perspective
The essay recognizes two distinct perspectives: reasons for using private cars and reasons for using public transport.
engagement
Your opinion is clearly stated, showing personal engagement with the topic.

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