The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of.. their course very good.

The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of.. their course very good.
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The table compares the results of the survey considering first-year taking different courses at a certain university and the number of students who considered various aspects of their course very good.
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while
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in Economics and Commerces the highest figure was Teaching
quality
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,in Laws the highest figure was Resource (other).
To begin
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with,in Economics highest indexes were Teaching
quality
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and Tutor support similar to 95% and 92%.The average index was among
Resources
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(print) and Resource (other) 59% and 62%.The smallest index was Pre-Course Information just 55%. In terms of Laws, the highest indicator was Tutor support and
Resources
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(other)
riching
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approximately 80%.The average indicators were Pre-Course Information and
Resources
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(print)similar to 72% and 70%.The lowest indicator was in Teaching
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about 67%. The
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course was Commerce,and the top figures were Pre-Course Information,Teaching
quality
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and Tutor support around 94%.The median images were
Resources
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(print) and
Resources
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(other) about 81% and 86%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words quality, resources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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