Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution

There has been a contentious debate over beneficial habits that could lead to a healthier lifestyle among

ealderly

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elderly

people

. Despite the positive impact that exercising and social activities have on old

people

, they tend to

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social and physical problems. Despite the common knowledge, I am inclined to believe that aged

people

have

lack

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of commitment. When the

last

stage of life

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up, individuals are often exhausted and they are not willing to keep up with

every day

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tasks. By

molding

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the way of thinking, a change might be achieved. First and foremost, it is important to note that old

people

comprehend a

sizeble

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sizeable

sizable

proportion of the

world

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porpulation

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population

. They are sometimes abandoned by their families. At an advanced age,

people

tend to narrow their relations and often relatives pass away. By lacking

of

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commitment and objectives,

ealderly

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they

are bound to

loose

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hope and

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down their activity, either mental

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or

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physical. Among the problems that old

people

tackle, there must be a solution involving de well-being of those who have developed

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world. Even though a change is difficult to

be achieved

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, fostering policies to help old

people

integrate

in

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into

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communities and

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valuable

for

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society could be an initial step to

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it done. Another solution comes across individual acts. By creating an inclusive

enviroment

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environment

for them, we could aim to positively impact

on

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their

behave

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.

To conclude

,

ealderly

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elderly

people

are sadly lonely and their lack of commitment and physical activity contributes to

deteriorate

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deterioration

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their

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health. By

implamating

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implementing

a social change, we can turn over

this

situation.