The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred
In the
Change preposition
The
given
pie charts, It Verb problem
apply
depicts
the five variant sources of fuel to generate energy in the USA, in the years 1980 and 1990.
Correct subject-verb agreement
depict
Overall
, it is evident that the
oil was the first priority Correct article usage
apply
for
Change preposition
as
source
of energy in both Add an article
the source
a source
the
charts.
In the year 1980, the consumption of Oil was the highest, Correct article usage
apply
with
Change preposition
at
fourty
two Correct your spelling
forty
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Although
, it dropped by nine points, in the year 1990. However
, the use of Hydroelectric power and Nuclear power remain
Change the verb form
remains
on
the lowest point with five Change preposition
at
percent
respectively, In Change the spelling
per cent
year
1980. Change the article
the year
Whereas
, it can be seen that use of Nuclear power had surge
to ten units in Change the verb form
surged
1990s
.
In the given Change the article
the 1990s
infortion
for both the graphs, Correct your spelling
information
it is clear that
Natural gas as a source of energy remained stagnant throughout. Eventhough
, the utilisation of Coal to produce Correct your spelling
Even though
electicity
Correct your spelling
electricity
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
incread
from Correct your spelling
increased
twenty two
Add a hyphen
twenty-two
percent
to Change the spelling
per cent
twenty seven
Add a hyphen
twenty-seven
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
respectivily
, for the years 1980 and 1990.Correct your spelling
respectively
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