Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that Capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and Disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.

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those who engaged in brutal illegal acts,

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sentence is intolerable in modern times. I strongly believe that the

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penalty should be applied only in some cases.

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juridical execution is that many people are scared of losing their lives, which may lead to a lower crime rate.

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, the murderers would get the punishment they deserve.

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those humans who think of committing a crime

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would think about it twice before actually doing it. On another hand, the

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of the

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execution is that many argue that it is inhuman, violating the principle of the right to life.

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, wrongful convictions can happen, and if an innocent person is executed, the mistake can not be undone.

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will have thoughts about what they have done for the rest of their lives. In conclusion, some people strongly

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that the

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penalty should be introduced as a punishment

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because the murderers would get what they deserve and the crime rate would go down.

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other individuals consider that it is inhuman to execute someone in our modern times. From my

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the

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warrant is crucial even in our contemporary world

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because it upholds the rule of

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.

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it supports justice for the victims and their families, providing a sense of closure. The

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penalty remains an important legal tool for addressing the most severe

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in today’s society.